Nacho Army of Club Penguin

Pie edit: I have to agree. The colored posts make us look like an army that was ment for small children. Even ACP doesn’t do that on their posts. It makes us look foolish. The only color on posts should be if you are trying to organize something (color coding), an edit, possibly a battle, or if you want to emphasize something (ex. If you are making a post about teamwork, you can make the word “teamwork” in your post a color so it stands out.)

Hola Nachos under this leadership, who I probably don’t know all that well 😦 !

I hope I do not come off as condescending with this post, but I felt it necessary. After monitoring the posts on the Nacho site for the past few months, I’ve noticed a sharp decline in the quality of content. Using “Heading 1 – 3” other than “Paragraph” is fine when used in the context of announcing something short. ie: “The Battle of Fjord” “Chat Rally!”. When users first enter this site, they see LARGE TEXT and edits that appear obnoxious. I apologize if you prefer this, because then I am just insulting your preference of website. However, to my knowledge, a majority of users do not like to be bombarded with posts filled with obnoxious colors and text. Most users would like to see professional content to assure them that the organization they are joining is not filled with morons, which leads me to my next point.

Grammar. Using proper grammar on posts is crucial to looking professional! I am aware this is based off of a game which was originally geared towards users 8 to 14 years old, but even a young child can realize what is professional. I have noticed that many posts include choppy paragraphs with punctuation that will leave one confused because of a lack of proper stops. I am not saying that I want perfection in grammar, yet I would be giddy to see an improvement. Furthermore, I am not saying to be verbose; please do not be verbose in your posts! Our audience consists of younger members, and it tends to be unfavorable to use a verbose vocabulary(using unnecessarily long words.)

Who am I to demand this?

I don’t believe I have the authority to DEMAND EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU to use 100% proper grammar. This is simply a strong suggestion coming from a person who led the Nachos to their highest point in history. I believe that this is my duty as an advisor, which is to give advice to the current leaders so they don’t make mistakes which I made, and can be prevented. Thank you for your time,

***Person1233***

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*awaits hate*

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